Death-Rig's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Good Luck Fools Episode 1]

I like your choice of expression. Not everyone thinks to use the Paper Mario style of story telling, let alone in just animation alone. if your can brush up the art work and maybe try to come up with some more poses for characters, I think you might have something people would genuinely enjoy. of course, this is only my first episode, haha.

GoodLuckFools responds:

I have always adored Paper Mario, even though I never actually played it, I found the aesthetic very appealing. I don't plan on abandoning this show any time soon, so hopefully with time will come more great content such as character poses. Thank you so much for your interest in the show and a wonderful review. I hope to be able to continue creating a cool story for you to enjoy!

[Late For School]

Meh, animation was decent but it some of the character didn't seem alive.
Its all the small details that make a great animation such as:
Facial expressions

Active Bodymovement

And better flow in between scenes.

This could have potential if these small details are cleaned up.
Overall, not bad. three flying E.T. bycicles outa five.

BTW if i sounded like a douche then sorry. :-P

Kel-chan responds:

thanks alot

alot of ppl just leave a comment saying it was bad or good but dont tell me things to work on